Week 4 Presentation and Feedback

For the presentation on Tuesday we compiled all our footage into a video on Premier and roughly cut it so that our general persuasion and advertising was clear to the class and so we could get feedback to improve.



The general feedback from the presentation was that the video and audio quality were quite good, but could be improved with more effects and editing, the video was funny but a little too relying on the jokes.

With this feedback we are going to edit the video more using colour grading and colour correction as well as cropping. We are thinking of removing some of the jokes or censoring some to make them less "out there" but still funny and coincides with the rest of the videos humour. This will also help with the pace and flow of the video which at this point is quite stuttery. With the persuasion we aim to put information at the end of the video but in an interesting way including a graphic etc to make sure that it's not boring and will actually be read by the audience. 

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